Hey if u cant even make it more interesting in this chapter can u atleast save up chapters until theirs something to react to? Your story lacks consistency and its nit interesting if u just make the main character a bum
I like your art because its similar to overgeared,the characters have more unique,expressive and more variant than what your doing all u do is right another long reason or explanation and never gonna show the fights or even just some beef?
Ive waited 2 years to see where this is going but your disapointing as a writer.
Hey if u cant even make it more interesting in this chapter can u atleast save up chapters until theirs something to react to? Your story lacks consistency and its nit interesting if u just make the main character a bum
I like your art because its similar to overgeared,the characters have more unique,expressive and more variant than what your doing all u do is right another long reason or explanation and never gonna show the fights or even just some beef?
Ive waited 2 years to see where this is going but your disapointing as a writer.